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-Six days
And I haven’t said a word
Not that it would matter anyway

Five miles
From anyone who
Knew me yesterday

Four voices
Running through my head
That just won’t go away


Three words
I should have never said
Haunt me everyday

Two scars
Refuse to disappear
Resulting from my own despair

And
One person
I can no longer hear-

You left me
As if it didn’t matter
You said
You hated me

You struck me
With a bare hand
Cursed me
Tossed me away

That’s okay
I never mattered anyway

-Six days
And I haven’t said a word
Not that it would matter anyway

Five miles
From anyone who
Knew me yesterday

Four voices
Running through my head
That just won’t go away


Three words
I should have never said
Haunt me everyday

Two scars
Refuse to disappear
Resulting from my own despair

And
One person
I can no longer hear-

I promised
To be better
I promised
To not cry anymore

You said I was
Getting too intense

How is making me bleed
Less intense than this?

-Six days
And I haven’t said a word
Not that it would matter anyway

Five miles
From anyone who
Knew me yesterday

Four voices
Running through my head
That just won’t go away


Three words
I should have never said
Haunt me everyday

Two scars
Refuse to disappear
Resulting from my own despair

And
One person
I can no longer hear-

I used to pretend
The pain was never real
I used to pretend
You yelled
Only because I had been bad

Now I understand
You only wanted to command


-Six days
And I haven’t said a word
Not that it would matter anyway

Five miles
From anyone who
Knew me yesterday

Four voices
Running through my head
That just won’t go away


Three words
I should have never said
Haunt me everyday

Two scars
Refuse to disappear
Resulting from my own despair

And
One person
I can no longer hear-


It’s you…
It’s you… (Fading exit)
©2004-2009 ~obsidiantear
:iconobsidiantear:

Author's Comments

Weee. A song. My friend Erika sings it suppa well. But she won't do it a lot. Makes me sad.

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:iconpoetic-obituary:
Well make her sing it more often. I've gotta hear it too, cuz just reading it isn't enough....
This is too good for just writing, send me sound, send me sound!!!

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:icondiscontentbeauty:
This is beautiful. I wish I could hear her sing it.

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:iconalwayzdazd:
wow..very emotional..nice job, hon.

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Am I a ghost upon the stage?

Am I your anything?


:iconxtheravenx:
That is....

wow....

I really wish I could hear this.

Wonderfully written.

:ninjafella:Matt:ninjafella:

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:iconkarmacursed:
Great job, very emotional. I like the succession of numbers counting down and how you played them into the writing.
Rock on. :horns:

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